I love that it's focused on such a small event, but it's a full episode and it works just fine.
I busted a nut when Flikkernicht came on.
I think the episode paid off for any trouble it gave you. It came around nicely.
Some of your background characters, like those cityfolk, do the job but they leave something to be desired I think. However, I didn't care much because the foreground characters had such pleasing animation... I know background characters are a chore...
Your framework is improving, and it's nice to watch occur between episodes. This is one of my favourites thus far. Your style is really shaping up.
The music I found had more variety this time around. It was nice to get a breather from the usual sound that accompanies your work.
The story was interesting. You and that slow world build. I'm quite eager to see more.
The background thing is particularly egregious this time around. Just compare it to Conduct. Had to let one thing be crap this time for time reasons and backdrop people who weren't patreon folks wuz it.... Not something I wanna repeat.
I think you did well with what you were given.
Your coloring is on point. It's nice to see consistently.
I'd like to see you push those poses in the future. You got it in you.
thanks man, and yeah i plan to put more cool poses in my later works
Aside from art, I think you're on a good path.
Interestingly written, and some good characters.
Art will come later, just keep at it.
This humour is riiiight up my alley.
This was good. But the last bit cemented this for me. That's hilarious.
That was a hell of a ride.
This pleases me so deeply.
Your framework is lovely.
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